Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, November 4, 2019
Swimming
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Hi, i like how you did the on Monday, on Tuesday. I like your font. next time you should write a little bit more. did you like swimming?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Oliva, I like you swimming slideshow
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool it tells me everything you done the pjs in the pool sounds so fun
Maybe next time you could think what fonts you are using
What was your favorite thing about the swimming trip ?