i have made a super hero. her name is dream girl. hope you enjoy.
what would you name your super hero?
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Hi Olivia!
ReplyDeleteI really like your super hero but i think you could have added a bit more to the text and explain what the activity was. I also think that you spelt the title wrong was it meant to say Dream Girl? Its really cool I enjoyed looking at this.