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Monday, September 23, 2019

Subway is a TOTAL RIP-OFF

For the past few weeks my class have been doing speeches for persuasive writing.My speech is about how  subway is a total RIP-OFF. I think that choosing a speech for persuasive writing because a speech is just to persuade people to agree with you or change their mind about something.
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My speech:
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HI my name is Olivia and my speech topic is. 
Subway is a total RIP-OFF!
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“ Subway is a total RIP-OFF, so who among you object to my reason.!!? Everyone who objects, Well I can change your mind”  
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Subway is just a fancy sandwich
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Think about it. You have bread, lettuce, tomato, carrot, cheese and onion with a tiny bit of meat. And I could make so many more sandwiches for like a tenth of the price. The actual price of a normal subway sandwich is $7.75 and over. That is a lot of money for a sandwich if you think about it. 
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I don’t even think the cheese is real
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Have you tasted that stuff? It’s all rubbery and chewy. I even once had mouldy cheese. It was so disgusting. Ewww. Just thinking about it makes me want to gag. I am pretty sure that how they make the cheese with milk, buttermilk, lemon juice and salt. I actually looked up how they make the cheese and it looks so disgusting. If you ask anyone they will tell you that how people make cheese is so disgusting. 
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 There's never enough meat
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Come on!!! We all know that we could get so much more meat. They say that it is a meatball sub but it is more like a meat smidge sub. ( bum bum chish ) ok ok I don’t see why we don’t get enough meat though. I actually looked at how people make meat and little, while they charge so much! 
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Concluding my speech today, I have discussed Subways intense rip-off. They charge too much, they give too little meat, they have disgusting cheese and you can just make it at home.
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Thank you for listening to my speech. 

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Have you ever done a speech? If you have what did you do your speech about?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Olivia. I liked your punctuation in your writing. i liked how your writing is a good size because some are too small or big. next time you should do more points. are you doing more about this.

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