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Monday, September 9, 2019

Wonder.

August is a 10 year old boy. August is the sun. Me and Mum and Dad are planets orbiting the sun. The rest of her family and friends are asteroids and comets floating around the planets orbiting the sun. The only settle body that doesn't orbit August the sun is days of the dog, and that's only because to her little doggie eyes, August as face doesn't like very different from any other humans face. Daisy all I faces look alike is flat and pale as the moon.

 

Have you ever seen the movie or read the book Wonder?

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  2. Hola Olivia, its Elizabeth from Parkview Parua school! I like how you described August as a sun and his family the other planets orbiting around him. How do you think you could describe him next time? But anyway, GOOD JOB! From Elizabeth!

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